Services
Manuscript Evaluation
When you need to know if your story “works” overall.
$400-600
based on word count*
✓
2-4 week turnaround
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In-line comments
✓
Basic editorial report
Developmental Edit
When you need to fine-tune your story and characters scene by scene.
$600-800
based on word count*
✓
4-6 week turnaround
✓
In-line comments
✓
Detailed editorial report
✓
Book map
Line/Copy Edit
When you need to polish your writing and perfect your grammar line by line.
$600-800
based on word count*
✓
6-8 week turnaround
✓
In-line comments
✓
Detailed style sheet
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A second round of up to 50 pages included
Manuscript Evaluation
A high-level look at the big picture elements of your story; essentially a light developmental edit or a more detailed and solutions-focused beta read.
Service includes:
- Light in-line comments with big picture feedback, focusing on pacing, character development and plotting. Typically includes about 100-150 comments per 100,000 words.
- A 3-6 page single-spaced report highlighting the manuscript’s primary strengths and big picture challenges along with potential solutions.
Turnaround time: About 2-4 weeks; typically about 30-40 hours of hands-on time
Cost: $400-600*
Turnaround time and cost are based on manuscript length and revision status. Pricing is confirmed for each project during the sample edit.
This service might be a good fit for you if:
- You’ve completed several drafts of your manuscript and gotten feedback on the story from critique partners or beta readers but need a professional, objective assessment to help evaluate and implement the feedback.
- Your book isn’t quite landing with readers, but you have received conflicting feedback or aren’t sure how to revise.
- You’re stuck on a particular story question but are otherwise confident in your manuscript.
Multi-Service Discount
* Get 20% off both services when you book a manuscript evaluation or developmental edit and a line/copy edit on your manuscript.
Discount applied to the invoice for the second service. Services are scheduled and invoiced separately, with author revisions between.
Developmental Edit
A thorough big picture look at your story’s plot, structure and characters.
Service includes:
- Detailed in-line comments with big picture feedback, focusing on pacing, character development and plotting. Typically includes about 200-300 comments per 100,000 pages.
- A book map – a scene-by-scene chart of major plot and character moments along with visualizations and notes on how the structure impacts pacing, plot and character development.
- A detailed 5-10 page single-spaced report highlighting the manuscript’s strengths and big picture challenges along with potential solutions and a roadmap for revision.
Turnaround time: About 4-6 weeks; typically about 40-60 hours of hands-on time
Cost: $600-800*
Turnaround time and cost are based on manuscript length and revision status. Pricing is confirmed for each project during the sample edit.
This service might be a good fit for you if:
- You’ve completed several drafts on your own but need fresh eyes on your story to assess how it could land with readers.
- You want to grow your craft both in executing your current manuscript and in future writing by getting insights into your storytelling strengths and weaknesses.
- You’re exploring a new-to-you genre or trying something new and need detailed insights to help shape your story.
- You want to ensure every chapter and scene hits just right.
Line/Copy Edit
Service includes:
- Line edits (via markup in track changes plus in-line comments) on the full manuscript focusing on paragraph and sentence-level details relevant to character voices, tone, pacing, narrative voice, emotional impact, etc.
- Copy edits (via markup in track changes plus in-line comments) on the full manuscript, focusing on sentence-level details to include spelling, grammar, punctuation style, etc. and following the Chicago Manual of Style.
- A style sheet with key details of the story, characters, timeline and style choices around numbers, spelling variations, hyphenation, styling of text etc. to ensure consistency and continuity.
- Includes a second round of copy editing on up to 50 pages after author revisions (for any chapters or scenes that are more heavily revised).
Turnaround time: About 6-8 weeks
Cost: $600-800*
Turnaround time and cost are based on manuscript length and revision status. Pricing is confirmed for each project during the sample edit.
This service might be a good fit for you if:
- Your story is fully revised and you’re ready to fine-tune your prose and perfect your style.
- You’ve revised your manuscript so many times that you need fresh eyes to catch continuity issues, typos and sentence-level errors.

Ready to learn more?
Contact me for a free sample edit and detailed project quote!
Editing by Karen Hansen

